Fairtrade t-shirt Take 2

This is the other version (also not quite there b/c at the moment it’s kinda sitting on his neck) with the city more on the guy’s back.

Which is better? This one, or this one here?

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4 Comments

  1. said:

    I like the first one better.

    March 27, 2009
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  2. said:

    I agree with Geoff…the first one is way better
    if that one was on a t-shirt the design would be in a funny spot…plus those pointing things at the top look like they would skewer you in the chin

    March 27, 2009
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  3. William said:

    I think that the problem with the perspective on the buildings is that it tends to draw your eye up, not down. I presume that you want the person at the bottom to be the focus. Also, perhaps a bit of shadow on the guy’s back would help to root the start of the building there. Unfortunatley there’s still a bit of disconnect there. It looks like a group of ants built a city on his back rather than the crushing weight of the first world.

    March 31, 2009
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    • Thanks for the comment! Yes I think you’re right. I’m not going with this version… something closer to the first one will probably do.

      April 1, 2009
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