I agree with Geoff…the first one is way better
if that one was on a t-shirt the design would be in a funny spot…plus those pointing things at the top look like they would skewer you in the chin
I think that the problem with the perspective on the buildings is that it tends to draw your eye up, not down. I presume that you want the person at the bottom to be the focus. Also, perhaps a bit of shadow on the guy’s back would help to root the start of the building there. Unfortunatley there’s still a bit of disconnect there. It looks like a group of ants built a city on his back rather than the crushing weight of the first world.
I like the first one better.
I agree with Geoff…the first one is way better
if that one was on a t-shirt the design would be in a funny spot…plus those pointing things at the top look like they would skewer you in the chin
I think that the problem with the perspective on the buildings is that it tends to draw your eye up, not down. I presume that you want the person at the bottom to be the focus. Also, perhaps a bit of shadow on the guy’s back would help to root the start of the building there. Unfortunatley there’s still a bit of disconnect there. It looks like a group of ants built a city on his back rather than the crushing weight of the first world.
Thanks for the comment! Yes I think you’re right. I’m not going with this version… something closer to the first one will probably do.